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Sara Levine's avatar

Love this. I recently talked about "end focus" on my substack Delusions of Grammar. (Albeit in a much more silly way. I taught it at the dog beach.) Is the Principle of End Weight the same as End Focus? Maybe just a different name for the same thing?

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It seems to me that the simplest fix for the Guardian headline is: "Climate experts' and politicians' turn on Tony Blair risks &c", which I may be primed for because my perhaps overlatinized sensibility would call the "politicians spreading conspiracy theories on the internet" example incorrect and have it be either: (a) "politicians spreading conspiracy theories on the internet pose a risk to our democracy" or (b) "politicians' spreading of conspiracy theories on the internet poses a risk to our democracy": the risk comes either from the politicians (in which case "pose" should be plural) or, if "pose" is singular and the risk is the spreading, then it's *their* spreading.

Incidentally, I find the "I consider a genius the person who …" to be somewhat affected compared to "I consider the person who … a genius": the construction of the former strikes me as rather stilted and formal, and actually less easily processed, precisely because the order of the components is all out of whack: I very much want the object of "consider" to follow it immediately, independent of its length, unless the complement is being especially emphasized. "I consider any friend of his a friend of mine" is much better, or at least plainer, than "I consider a friend of mine any friend of his"; "I consider anyone who would condescend to speak at that conference, which is well known for hosting the worst sort of pseudo-sophisticated nonsense that actually just recapitulates the idiocy that passes for conventional wisdom in these disgraceful times, utterly reprehensible" is at a minimum not worse than "I consider utterly reprehensible anyone who would &c"

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